- Erotic Poetry
- Coup de Amour
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Click hereDraped in white sheets
sustained against my model's stand
I pose you
Repose you
Possess you
Fuck you
Splayed and tethered,
your finger-bruised thighs
open to reveal raw need
wrists fastened to the mahl stick,
The pose of a woman taken
unwillingly
Face turned away in ambiguous modesty
Emergent desire to be had. Again.
Your body deceives you
Whispered words commanding shivers
hot breath assaults your sex
devouring you without mercy
as your need dampens my sheets
- COMMENTS
cloudyalmost 16 years agoI think I like the rawness (is that a word?) of this one, as compared to the more romantic vision in the other...but then, I'm twisted like that. Very nice.
Angelinealmost 16 years agowith a focus (on D/s sex) that is light years better than the gazillion mediocre "Master" poems I've read here. I dunno, maybe the different (ie., the Dom's) perspective makes this more interesting. Certainly the images are powerful. I got a little confused by the uneven punctuation (coupled with the uneven initial caps/lowercases). Also, I thought "Emergent desire to be had" is weak because of the passive construction. Overall really good, though.
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