- Erotic Poetry
- craving
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silence
now
the flame is lit
small hot focus
of need
ignites inside
again
a sensation of melting
slow smoldering burn
dissolving me
deep
again
the blaze kindled
by the dark desires
so well hidden
inside me
again
a sharp breath
fans the flame
a single word
becomes
an inferno
again
the craving combusts
control and will
reduced to ashes
my flickering flame
is drawn into
Your blaze
my soul branded
by the intensity
of Your fiery touch
my vivid glow
is Yours again
my red my heat my flame
are ever Yours
again
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 17 years agoi loved the fire/flame imagery. how the heat of the craving burns Him into her. only a true slave could feel the depth of these words.
LeBrozabout 17 years agoExcellent ~ you kept most of the poem lean and taut, conveying so well the world of Dom and sub, then with such a severe buildup, that final stanza conveyed a strong sense of release.
Anonymousabout 17 years agoOh wow. You have captured such a depth of submission! Very good job! Bravo!
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