- Erotic Poetry
- Crazy Fox
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Click hereWe tread the precarious crumbling path,
Atop the cliff: wild waves below,
A humbling display of nature's wrath,
Fierce delight each face aglow.
A wild deserted spindrift strand,
A red gold mane of tousled hair,
A mischievous spirit holds my hand,
Before the waves a game of dare.
"Catch me!" she shouts running up the beach,
Towards the bleak and dripping rocks,
I take off running she's out of reach,
In pursuit of my .........Crazy Fox.
©J1 Oct 2008
- COMMENTS
jaynee1over 13 years agoAuthorLast line,........, along pause,all about punctuation and space,make sense?xxxxxxxjaynee1
Liarover 13 years agoClassically romantic, playful, overall pretty well written. Keep it up.
Not sure what the ...... in the last line is all about. No need for that.
