- Erotic Poetry
- Creation
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Tis better to give than receive
Never understood that idea
Until I felt the rush
Of the world in my face
Eyelids flicker
I see the beginning of time
And I take it in
Through all my senses
Creation, in my face…
I travel
Over the flat plain
Quivering, tight to
Upward thrusting pinnacle
Exploring the ridge
I open up and take it in
Hunger for the gift
My excitement mounts
As creation quakes
Under my tongue
Heat of new life
Emerging to the surface
Primordial ooze teeming with life
Sliding under my fingers
Swirled under my tongue
And for tonight
The world sleeps
Creation rests
- COMMENTS
hippiedudeover 19 years agoto imagine that I am the only one that took time to comment. The email reminded me of this poem so I had to come back and read it. It made it even harder - to understand that is. lol I think I've either used that phrase "primordial ooze" or I've seen it used in other poems. The whole creation motiff is pretty cool and especially when you place it in the context of sensuality. OR, Or I just can't resist a good blow job! I think the poem is great!
hippiedudealmost 20 years agoto imagine that I am the first to comment on this torrid piece. You do an excellent job of evoking some very vivid images and memories while provoking sustained contemplation of the story behind the story - nice depth - enough to float my boat!
