Criticism

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Words from your mouth as I glare with my eyes
My temper enrages as you fucking criticise
Pushing my limit every fucking day
Criticism should be a language with every word you say
My logic is different and you just can't understand
It's my perspective, I'm a different man
I am my own person
Cursed with curses that keep cursin'
I feel like you're belittling me and enjoying as you're having fun
It's highly annoying when it's always done
Yet you try to be meaning no harm to no one
Just stop questioning the way I think and your thoughts are always right
My feelings are like the baby's when they're crying and unanswered in the night
You're slowly building my rage when I have to explain
It's like another loss and nothing to gain
Not many understand me, not many will
OMFG if only my looks could kill
Sometimes think before ya run your fucking mouth
I won't even think and I'll knock ya the FUck OUT!

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Not many understand me, not many will.

Sometimes think before ya run your fucking mouth

I won't even think and I'll knock ya the FUck OUT!

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