- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Crossing the Veil
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Have you ever crossed the veil?
Visited with the Gods in Asgard's halls?
I have for I have crossed the veil
Sometimes I explore new worlds
Sometimes I learn new things across the veil
For I am something special
Neither male nor female but something in between.
For I have the gift to cross the veil
True many of us can
Then for others it eludes them
This gift to cross the veil.
Sometimes across the veil magic is preformed and its results are seen here in Midgard.
For to cross the veil is something special.
To have this gift is awesome indeed
For to cross the veil means you know the Gods are real for I have visited in there halls.
So take it or leave this gift to cross the veil
But use it wisely for the Gods know when we cross the veil!
- COMMENTS
Du Lacabout 17 years agothis is a gnostic subject that has much mystery to lend to a poem. While the subject is there for you to draw in the reader the overuse of your "crossing the veil" phase and long sentences that drop off without reason leave the reader wondering where is the mystery. Put this on the boards for review and edit and I think you will find the mystic flowing again to make the reader want to know more.
du lac
My Erotic Trailabout 17 years ago...interesting, I always felt that the yin and yang was the most accurate way to perceive life... there is life and then there is death... "nothing" then the other day I was watching the science channel and they are exploring the highly possible idea that there are (well there are but speculation as to what they are) but they found parallel universes within our own world but are not sure what purpose they pose for life and they still argue the point of a traveling souls...anyway...interesting write, thanks for the read.
