Cruel

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I want to hurt you, want to see you as bare as can be.

Want to see you weak and powerless against me.

Want to see you on your knees and begging as much as you can.

Want to see your bare emotions and finally understand.

Want to twist your will, want to use your mind and body for my own affairs.

Want to rule over you and command you around.

Want to see you suffer, want to watch you cry and fall to the ground.

Why I want to see someone I love in so much pain is still a mystery to me.

Still I can’t help but want to, can’t help but fantasize about it and make it real in my mind.

You make me want to hurt you.

You make me want to make you mine.

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Another poem from the Domme's eyes. Could have more punch with a bit of tweaking; here's a small suggestion just on the first 3 lines:

<P>I want to hurt you, want to see you bare.

<P>Want to see you weak and powerless.

<P>Want to see you on your knees and begging.

<P> That's just to give you an idea; it could stand more tweaking but this points you in the direction. After you write it, show the power of the Domme and edit it to the barest and strongest words.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Some people...

want to inflict pain, some want to feel pain. It only works well when you get one of each..

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