Crumbs

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Day old bread
discarded, tossed to the wind.
No thought to pattern,
scattered hastily;
food for crows.

Crusts still intact;
fancy finger food wasn’t coveted,
but more than a casual tidbit was needed.
Freshness now leeched;
sitting on the shelf,
time offers no grace.

Crumbs no longer sustain.
Stale and without substance;
bereft of value, purity;
a murky gray.
A beggar’s banquet
tempts no more.

You don’t understand
why the scraps once held,
no longer serve me.
A ravenous appetite
demands satiation.
Credence gives hope
for a feast never before known.

Specks of mold form;
particles continue to decay.
As my back turns
the pecking begins;
squawks echo,
vultures hover, and compete
for this worthless fodder.

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LeBrozLeBrozalmost 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.

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LeBrozLeBrozalmost 17 years ago
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Another excellent piece from that Poetry Class of '04.

steve portersteve porterover 19 years ago
very nice...

especially the last line "and compete for this worthless fodder." Thank you!

PatCarringtonPatCarringtonover 19 years ago
good reading.

i agree with Tath / your poetry is getting stronger, finding a voice /

flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
Excellent

Very compelling imagery, ICM.

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