"You're pretty"
She giggles and runs away
I chase after
Five years pass
We're finally going out
We giggle over that day
The day I told her she's pretty
The day she kissed me
Three years pass
We're on the rocks
Still working on it though
I tell her she's pretty
She runs away
I chase after
Twenty years pass
We still laugh over that day
The day I told her she's pretty
The day I asked her to marry me

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