Crux of Belief

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Birth place of civilization,
where dust feeds
famished souls the venom of belief.

Mothers cry at birth
already awaiting death
for their newly born sons.
Infants gasp,
their first bursts of air
filled with
religion and hate.
Nursing,
growing,
living
on the theology of pain.

Soldiers footsteps echo,
an ominous lullaby
for the ears of children.
They look at the world with
eyes a million years old,
watching the
Blood baptize
parched earth.
Seeing that Man has been cast out.

I would choose to endure not
this hateful ground.
Crucify me,
for I would gladly die
a thousand deaths
if I could wash the stains on man's soul away.

There are no Angels
that watch over,
phantoms are all that will remain
to bear witness to this
plauge.
Sheding ghostly tears
on the wind blown sands
where man began.

Where are our gods now?

Legions have returned,
festering
feeding
growing
consuming all.

Forgive us,
for we know not what we do
in the name of all that is holy.

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LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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A really haunting look at the birthplace of the three major monotheistic faiths.

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
a really strong

and powerful piece,

exceptionally well

written, a very

enjoyable read.

thanks.

~ J

Bridget69Bridget69almost 19 years ago
Powerful!

Love the way this expresses how children are brought into a hopeless world that is so tainted with hate and injustice.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
rub Buddha's Belly~

you'll feel better <grin>

Very intriguing poem~

your visual and descriptive write was griping.

'Kruks'! "a very important point!"

and a very mystique poem.

(I had my dictionary ready this time ) <grin>

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
and the religious struggle

goes on and on ....factions of the chosen frozen sleeping as the world falls down...great depth...blue

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