Cum N Go

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People will cum, and people will go.
Some won't go away. Some never show.
Those who you like and some you don't know.
ever been invited, then told where to go?
I don't mean to be distant, or cum off as rude.
I'm sure that it sounds like I'm in a bad mood.
But I don't really care to meet anyone new!
And it's none of your business "How do I do!"
There's some who have lost it, twice maybe more.
I think there's one now, I hear at the door!
They're hard to ignore, when they don't go away.
They never come back, if you want them to stay!
Take them for granted, they die and you grieve!
Be cautious of liars and whats up there sleeves.
A "People Person"? No. I guess I am not.
Yet I know I am loved by the few that I've got!

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
erotic?

i dont know how erotic that was, but I liked it alot!

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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No rose colored glasses here in looking at people.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
what a voice !!!!!!!!!!!!!

I would love to read all your work. Then again, I would love to hear you read me all your work. Its great.

jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
An interesting poem

the rhyme felt a bit forced. Working with rhyming couplets is tough, you might want to work a less restrictive rhyme scheme to help the poem flow a bit more naturally. You might want to make a correction to your third to last line: "there" wants to be "their". The audio was excellent and added to the poem. Overall, very good.

jim :)

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