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Click hereCynicism Conceived
Gravel dust motes
Float upon spring night air;
The waning half moon
Slides behind darkened thunderheads
The soft light fades.
Maybe a light rain
To wash away the grime,
Of yet another day wasted.
The pace of life is slow
Still, the days breeze on by
Leaving me bereft of yet
Another bite of this bland soup.
All the spices
Settled upon the bottom
Of a twenty year old Dutch oven.
Middle age will be better?
More than likely not,
For I am a creature ever wanting
The elusive.
The intangible.
The ghosts of a little girl’s dreams
And the lusts of a misguided teenager.
Yearning inside, never ceasing
As a fist closes around the heart
Squeezing.
Eyes well with tears
Never spilt.
For though my
Weaknesses are many
My mind struggles
To gain logic over emotion.
A cynic is conceived
Parasitical to the heart
Hibernating ‘till time is ripe
The seed of it is growing
The roots strong and soaking
Up the Spring Rain,
While it is flowing.
Hurt will do that do the heart,
I think;
As thunder is released,
The rain pours down
Blurring my form
Behind tomorrow.
Thanks so much Anna, I know I have a bit of growing to do that will only come from age and possibly from studying the 'masters' LOL. Thanks all so much for these awesome comments. Tho I do have to say.. YYD.. You confuse me.
I was just wondering where you were.
This poem DOES have a lot of potential-- i cannot wait to read your middle age poetry- you are so good already. It is better in some ways. I dont know, wait, am I middle aged yet? lol
This is an unpoloshed gem. So much beauty waiting to be buffed into a shine.
Like this.
the bland soup line was great.
as was the little girl and misguided teenager..
I can feel this woman...
beautiful piece
thank you