- Erotic Poetry
- Dare To Dream
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Dare II Dream
She came out of nowhere
I fixed her with my stare
A vision divine
I glowed knowing she was mine
For years I yearned
So quickly she had learned
To find my other half
That we could love and laugh
My search had been long
As our souls joined in song
My patience had been tested
A pairing never bested
But now at last
Her eyes downcast
She gave my hopes a lift
Her submission a gift
She allowed me to dare
So precious and rare
My chains to lose
Mine to use
I dare to dream!
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoI fixed her with my stare?
Your stared fixed her?
Or do you mean that you fixed your eyes on her?
This poem reads like a bdsm hallmark.
How was your patience tested?
This would be far more interesting if you wrote about the moment she gave you the gift of submission. Tell a story. Give some details. As a reader, I can't find any meat in your poem to chew on.
Exercising my right to: ("Love it? Hate it? Have suggestions? You can leave a public comment on this submission!)
sincerely,
unregistered and anonymous
but avid reader
