- Erotic Poetry
- Dark Sensuality
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Click hereEyes closed
Roses poor onto a candlelit bed
silk linins drape my body
soft...warm lips press lightly against my flesh
A shallow breath against my neck
bare fingers dance along my tummy
my body aches for more
warm lips meeting with my own
an embrace, an eturnity unmatched
He, like the moon, mysterious
Yet...so known
Roses cascade around us
I lose my silken fortress
candlelight show only his eyes
which speak loudly, yet not a word spoken
Soft moans turn to subdued screams
I call his name, we quiver
He calls mine in return,
I am, at his mercy.
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 17 years agoAfter reading your first piece, was a bit surprised to see some basic spelling problems.
Roses poor? perhaps pour or poured?
silk linins? perhaps linens
an eturnity? try eternity.
Such problems invite the reader to look for more, rather than to read what you've written.
