- Erotic Poetry
- Dark Whisper
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Click hereForever I am lost.
I crave the pain
I went to hell to seek my fortune of torture
I spent many days searching what I know I will never have
maybe hell can give me what I seek
Fire upon my skin no tears will be shed
Flames spread across my flesh
no weeping will be heard
The frigid cold blade upon my throat
will be no screams of horror
They will be only moans of pleasure
The chains around my ankles are
my weakness of ecstasy
Tie me up
Please me
Give me pain
Take me as you will
send me into another world unknown
I shall never plead for another
I shall only be yours to do
as you wish
Cover me with pain
Shield me with your desire
Collar me with your passion
Choke me with your ecstasy
Flog me with your love
Give me what I seek the torture
I crave
I will bow down to your commands
without words spoken
I shall not whimper
I shall not weep
I will give myself total and complete
to my Masters desires
My hands held high
My legs spread wide
I am all yours to do as you wish
- COMMENTS
LeBrozabout 17 years agoThis comment ended up on your first piece by mistake; this starts off better than your first piece but the last third (or maybe even half) weakens all you've accomplished here. Drop the last third/half and, with the remainder, do some tweaking and you can have a truly powerful piece from the view of a sub.
Amyfriendabout 17 years agogiving into her master, poem. I know, flog you with love and spread your legs wide, rattle some chains etc. You could have made two decent poems out of that one and it would have been much better, instead of droning on and on.
