Dark, yet unnamed & unrefined poem

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The night is a cradle of shadows,
Overwhelming darkness creeps,
Ambushed by a cosmic blanket,
The cloud cover drapes over,
Swaddling with a strangle hold,
A nocturnal smothering vice,
Coupled with a grieving wind,
Terror clutches command,
United by my subconscious,
Within the realm of dreams,
A nightmare takes its shape,
Coating in hopelessness,
Marinating with gloom,
Breaching all defenses,
Cannot confine this depression,
My psyche about to break,
Seeping now into the light of day,
Eclipsing on daily life,
Logic and understanding,
Distorted by suicidal thought.

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nz_marienz_marieabout 17 years ago
darkness creeps in

very much enjoyed your poem. I would have called it Foreboding Presence or Ominous Darkness perhaps even Parasitical Night. Great work.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 17 years ago
dark...

...I felt the emotional passion of your pen (~_~)