- Erotic Poetry
- Darkest Hour
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In my darkest hour
In my sweet and solemn moment
I let go of the person I was trying to be
The warmth of your breast on my lips, the heat of your lust laced breaths
They fill the emptiness a little
You shadow the memories of my lost angel
Thats what I need
What I crave
Strip me naked and devour me
I want you tongue licking me
I want your mouth sucking me to the edge of bliss and oblivion
I was delicate with her
Painting every passionate moment into my heart
I want to take you fast, and hard
Thrusting savagely into you
I want you to sing to me the siren's song
And end it with a beautiful scream that shatters me to my core
I'll pour all my despair and longing into you
And then I want you gone
- COMMENTS
Mia Mooreabout 13 years agoit sounds like something others have written, then you probably need to revise it.I saw several lines that are used in almost every erotic poem here. Sucking, licking....over me.... try to think of new ways to describe these actions and then you will have a unique poem, one that is all yours.
BUT, keep writing, never give up. You learn and grow with each new line :)
UnderYourSpellabout 13 years agoI like this a lot, it's erotic but also it tells of a longing for his lost love that can't be entirely assuaged by another
I especially like the line
'Painting every passionate moment into my heart'
