darkness is with me

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 i feel this darkness upon me
that promises to take me to a new  plain
it offers such sweet release to a place with no pain  
i give in to this darkness closeing my eyes ..
i feel myself leaveing this body of mine  
  the voices call me back ..i fight to be let go

i don`t want to be here .. so why do they care .my problems are more than i can even bare ..
"ITS NOT YOUR TIME " i hear them say ..your life is important to us anyway

their love i feel as i reluctantly draw away from the peace of the darkness that holds me in sway..
i follow the voices that bring me back to the light ..i guess i`ll have to learn to put up more of a fight ..

as i turn to walk from the darkness that hold it`s arms out for me i swear i hear it  whisper
'MAYBE ANOTHER DAY IT SEEMS "

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Me in high school

I used be exactually like that in high school I climb those steps to the top of the school winch leads to the roof. I reach for the door and I turn back was it fear? or was it' some thing else like the voices? But I'm better now, no longer I think of killing myself.

For those of you planning on killing your self just please please I'm begging you, remember my little story, and that it won't be easy or quick. But eventually things would get better and you would eventually think that the reason for you to kill yourself was not worth it at all. And everyone else can go duck themselves. Hell you may even ask yourself why you what to kill yourself the next time when you have that desire to. NOT SHITTING YOU!!!!!!! SEAROUSE SHIT!!!!!!!

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
Nice piece

I love the emotional darkness

of your poetry, you can see

that there is real pain behind

your words and I hope one day soon

you will find the light.

Thank you for sharing this

with me today.

~ Jenn

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