- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Daybreak in Tegus
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high hill
half moon
a fairground attraction
the bullfrog's tune
moonpath
turns sunroad
the bullfrogs shut up
as the birds explode
- COMMENTS
HarryHillover 11 years agobut, ...I think high hill is a visual element ...I have a spot I go to occasionally ...very stiring to see the earth below from a high place...(then again there is that hidden context) Something to think about Good one.
Desejoover 11 years agoI love the last sentence- the birds explode- it does sound like that in some places. And then you WISH they would explode so you could sleep in. I'm not wild about the first sentence: high hill. I think you could have come up with something stronger - a hill is just not as compelling as birds exploding or moonpaths turning to sunroads.
