- Non-Erotic Poetry
- daydream
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Come, steer the boat downstream and we won't need
to make an effort and attain some goal;
with trailing oars the boat may choose her speed
and we'll sit back and feel the river roll
and drowse and listen. Overhead a bird
thrills to the world and all the sky is blue –
and half asleep it doesn't seem absurd
to think we might wake up to start anew.
- COMMENTS
buttersover 11 years agoso neatly crafted in an elegance of pentameter as to let us slide along on the river's current, half-drowsed and dreamy, midsummered.
DawnJover 11 years ago...are those that leave us with a smile. And hope is a smile-maker, isn't it? :) You've got some lovely, lively images here -- a picture-perfect poem for a picture perfect daydream!
tazz317over 11 years agoafter the wake up and rest, you will just be further away but with a paddle TK U MLJ LV NV
twelveooneover 11 years agoin New Poetry Recommendations
here http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=254157&page=140
I did not say why, nor will I do it here
let them parse it, which probably you should do too, there, in good poetry, is something else besides the surface read through, which you seem to do too much of
5ed of course
