In the beginning was the word
from your former reach around girl
on the day they hauled away
your televangelic face
that smiled every night at nine o'clock
for white haired ladies who stay up late.
Phone sex cost five bucks a pop.
Sharkskins wheedle altar calls.
The Ark Park opens early.
On the Sabbath it closes at eight.
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AT THE ENDING
the circle closes and re-opens. TK U MLJ LV NV
I remember your first rendering of this
It had more contact to it which as someone not from America gave it more than this version. Definitely E worthy in my opinion, but I wonder if I had not seen your first piece 8 I would have understood any of it?more...
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