Death Metal Love

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she's splayed
across her blade
I watched her fade
from the plans we made

you fled
from our wedding bed
leave footprints red
everywhere you tread

full blast
I mowed her grass
I kissed her ass
my time has passed

obligation
renovation
disillusion
we ain't movin
cupcakes frosted
stay exhausted
call the fight
stay out of sight
self exposure
lack of closure
clock is ticking
you still kicking?

what more
can we hope for?
even up the score
close another door

we ran
obscure the brand
get out while we can
make another plan

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Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnabout 20 years ago
Sad, angry,

great emotion here. I love alliteration and the words play nicely together.

you fled

from our wedding bed

leave footprints red

everywhere you tread

I like this visual, I can feel her dicing your heart.

YDDYDDabout 20 years ago
Rap spawn

Rap spawn, HipHop eggs?

That is what the constant rhyming reminds me of.

A list of rhyming phrases to be expanded in a Rap?

Some good words,

nothing special as a list,

but I would like to hear it read to a beat.

Syncopation, this is thy sting.

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