- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Debt of Life
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Click hereShe offers comfort
From trials and tribulations
For she has been there.
She gives hope and heart
To battle on, face the foe
Light and right assured.
She looks for nothing
No favour needs returning
Happiness is all.
Debt beyond recourse
No recompense could cover
Truth is: mother knows.
- COMMENTS
Tarakinover 16 years agoA very nice poem, with a pleasant surprise at the end. Great work, thanks for sharing!
Bill Dadaover 16 years agoIt reads more like a diagram and it needs to read more like a painting. Of course that is just my opinion.
RhymeFairyover 16 years agoI see a bit of repetitiveness, it kinda takes away from the ambiance but I love the creative energy here. Keep'm coming my friend ~~
