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Deceptively Firm

bySweetOblivion©

Developed at the edge,
firm roots deceive;
they bring out wilder tones,
evocative reminders,
with distinct advantages
over softer ventures;

She will never get rid
of the sense of abandonment;
nor does she want to;
but, in the drizzle,
she gets wet as quickly
as deceptively firm roots.

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