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Tzara
Tzara
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No man has ever liked my breasts,
you said and nor do I.
Like is too shallow for the pool
that is my feeling for them,
into which, and you, I dive.

Tzara
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Bill DadaBill Dadaalmost 17 years ago
^

Being a fan of brevity, I had to like it and 'Like is too shallow for the pool'

LeBrozLeBrozalmost 17 years ago
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Taste it a few times to best savor the excellent economy of words that manages to say so much.

MyNecroticSnailMyNecroticSnailabout 17 years ago
The future

of Hallmark.

I see the card.

Seriously, well (oh cripes) crafted.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Wordsmith

You are a true wordsmith, Tzara

Excellent economy of words with a well honed metaphor

Rather splendid, as it always is

WickedEveWickedEveabout 17 years ago
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This is a good write, T. And I love how few words you had to use!

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