- Erotic Poetry
- desire
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Click herei feel a wave of desire
come over me
its flooding my body
so intense
my need to have you
is washing right through me
to feel your hand on my skin
your fingers running through my hair
makes me so hot
this wave is soaking me through
with all these things you are doing
my thighs are shaking
my sighs are getting louder
one simle move will make me splash
lap by lap these waves go through me
each stronger than the last
nothing to grab onto
no escape, what you are doing
is making me crazy
kiss me hard, take me there
can you see how my eyes are?
playing tricks on me.
can you feel my climax coming on?
i want you
i need you
to bring this on
so i can release
this power you are bringing
out of me.
- COMMENTS
Maria2394over 19 years agobut you really should edit, a spell check would have been valuable in this one. Also, you might consider showing your reader instead of just narrating. YOu have some good ideas!
keep writing, and most importantly, keep reading. There are many excellent poets here, who are masterful at description. If you ever want, there are many folks here who would be glad to read over your poems before you submit them, ( myself included) :)
My Erotic Taleover 19 years agoan excellent description
in a passionate poem,
drove desire right into me,
powerful and very gripping
loved the style and flow
inspirational~
