Devil Lived

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njoyjade
njoyjade
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Born with an evil look in his eyes,
Devil he was named .
His valor only increased his worth ,
companions we remained.

Freedom and will we had from birth
his spirit so like mine;
I spiked his oats with rosehip
it helped his coat to shine.

Inhaling embers of admiration,
he was filled with pride.
His nostrils flared, we'd lose our breath,
on our daily ride.

Mane like chains of silver,
his sweat dried from the sun.
We splintered every bridge we crossed;
our goal was having fun.

Devil was my angel,
our kinship will never be sieved.
His colts and filly's share his look;
a horse named Devil Lived.

njoyjade
njoyjade
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njoyjadenjoyjadeover 10 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

I appreciate all of your kind comments very much! =)

LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago
very nice

Well written and enjoyable.

Oldbear63Oldbear63over 10 years ago
There is something about a relationship with a horse

I am glad you had your Devil, glad you are writing about him now. I can almost see the biitersweet look on your face, maybe a littel tear. Nicely done, Njoyjade.

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
girl loves Stallion ----years elapse , now a mature Poetess she fondly reminisces &

writes an Ode to her beloved Devil .......5-ed !

todski28todski28over 10 years ago
Smooth rhythm

reads excellent, and great sentiments. pets become part of the family