- Erotic Poetry
- Dew From A Rose...
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Honey drip's
Like dew from a rose
Sweet muffled sigh's
Deep in her throat
Passion rising
Within her throe's
A taste of love
Only I know...
IMspidey/M.M. 9/07
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- COMMENTS
Corpse_rideralmost 13 years agoRe: feedback, you are welcome.
I submitted a poem on Saturday, so hopefully it will be up this week. Don't hold your breath, though - I'm no poet. I only wrote it because my fiction piece is taking longer than I thought to finish.
Regards,
Corpse_rider
Corpse_rideralmost 13 years agoThis is nearly very good, but your poor grammar betrays the piece.You have given 'drips', 'sighs' and 'throes', all needless apostrophes, making them possessive. An apostrophe indicates either a possessive noun/pronoun, or indicates missing letters ie: she'd (she had). If the word is plural as in drips, sighs, and throes, no apostrophe is necessary.
Here endith the lesson.
All that aside, I like the poem.
