Dewdrop

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I knew what he needed
in the second that it took
to swallow cappuccino
confessions at three a.m.
and against my better judgment
I extended comfort’s hand
to brush the wisps of hair
and dreams, fallen in his eyes.
I took him home silently
curled into his leather,
treading dew drenched leaves,
forging a slippery path.
It was after he’d sunk in
that I queried what I’d done,
and if he’d ever leave,
and how I’d slip away.

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LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,500 poems.

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ishtatishtatover 18 years ago
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Gets better with re-reading .I get a very clear image of a woman thinking these thoughts.

sacksackover 18 years ago
you could look at this in many ways.....

I sort of see it as Master/Slave but the ambiguity (for once) adds to this poems power.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 18 years ago
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understated, consistent

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
there is an undertone....

here that i'm picking up. very nice imagery indeed. it certainly leaves one hanging on the what if. that's my take....don

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