tagNon-Erotic PoetryDid You Come Here Just to Look?

Did You Come Here Just to Look?

byrubyslipper©

He says he loves me
and I echo it back like a good little bird:
I love you,
I love you
like vinegar in my mouth

And you clatter against the side of my cage
You
with your cool comprehension
of everything
that sickens and torments me,
and your lusting

Will you leave me in here -
even though I'm so pretty?
Sad and pretty
and senselessly repeating
I love you,
I love you
like vinegar in my mouth.

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