Digitized Bufoonery

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Ashesh9
Ashesh9
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What is the colour of Consciousness ?
Where is the Centre of the Universe ?
In a Singularity ?
Or a Point , Bindu , Particle ???
To a digitized bufoon this is substandard poetry
To an Enlightened Seer : the Source of all Wisdom !
Do not cast Pearls before Swine
They shall snootily upturn their snouts
& sniff " Substandard Poems " ?!?
" Crucify Him" screamed the Pharisees
"Substandard Poems" sniffs the digitized buffoon ........
.................Om

Ashesh9
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twelveoonetwelveooneover 10 years ago
you are cordially invited

to espouse your philosophy on poetry and/or technique in a thread entitled poetry and technique

btw

I didn't vote here

RemecRemecover 10 years ago
Hard to say

I think you have a kernel of commentary on the state of poetic review and critique, but I find it a little lost among the presentation. It made me think, though, which might be part of the purpose all along.

erectus123erectus123over 10 years ago
pigs are smarter than most people give them credit although some banks have extended

in fact most pigs are smarter than a lot of swine but refuse to answer questions or comment on the state of the universe, a truly wise statement in itself!

demure101demure101over 10 years ago
Grins...

Hard to do it right at any time... especially to anyone inclined to think poetry is for the feeble-minded :)

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