- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Dimensions Unraveled
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Click hereEntangled but unattached, 1
we forgot to knot the woven yarn.
Someone said expect the cold
Easily unraveled, exposed but not torn.
In your pocket,
matches with the cover folded
red tips hidden from
unintended ignition.
And our three dimensions
are squeezed into two,
Catch another look at you
your lips paused in time,
half of these dimensions are mine.
Myopic in this shallow game,
with my eyes closed the view is the same. 2
1in " A Poet's Singularity ", by sandspike ©2004.
2in " Can't Sleep II ", by flyguy69 ©2004.
- COMMENTS
LeBrozalmost 17 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,500 poems.
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WickedEveover 19 years agoEntangled but unattached, 1
we forgot to knot the woven yarn.
Perfect beginning lines for a poem. :)
tungtied2uover 19 years agoI knew there was more here than meets the eye..perhaps remorse? That's the undercurrent I caught....
BooMerengueover 19 years ago"Entangled but unattached, 1
we forgot to knot the woven yarn.
Someone said expect the cold
Easily unraveled, exposed but not torn."
This put me in mind of Simon and Garfunkel- which is a good thing! Thanks!
