Diminished

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bluerains
bluerains
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I journey below
the surface of
rain stored
puddles
of your heart,
silently dancing above
its stinging downpour.

My reflection,
a penumbra,
perspiring
upon your brow,
blinded by a silver
crescent moon.

In a salient draft
breath hides in
willow’s wilderness,
another etching
of elixir gathers
its blue.

bluerains
bluerains
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3 Comments
MsBugMsBugalmost 18 years ago
Thanks

Reading this, is an intake of breath. Lovely.

lobomaolobomaoabout 18 years ago
•)

what falls falls to us

to embrace or cast away

dance as do in savage downpours

chosing to drink in the blue blue rains

take them to heart and so to it

our hearts are so much the richer

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
the blue

from the depths of the blue a poem arises here that reflects the beauty of this color <grin blue~

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