diogenes

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as clever as a sandwich
i lie rotten in the sun

waiting for one honest man
who'll feed me to a dog

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KOLKOREKOLKOREabout 16 years ago
diogenes the rebel

I am basking in the warmth of this fun and humorous poem. Thanks.

Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 16 years ago
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WomanPariah said it all 'this little gem is fucking EPIC, man.'

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Debris

Simply Debris

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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Having looked further into the Diogenes history, I'm impressed by the way you've managed to unbury hidden, less savory elements of the myth — wanting to live with the freedom of a dog, he would urinate, defecate, and masturbate in public.

WomanPariahWomanPariahover 16 years ago
Diogenes syndrome is a behavioral disorder ...

... characterized by extreme self-neglect. And, Elmer, i don't know if i'm supposed use this info as part of interpreting this piece, but i'm guessing that i am. I think there were a number of historic "Diogenes" men, and so i'm thinking "which one is he talking about, if any?" So i expect i'll spend at least an hour doing some googling over that one. Nice going, Elmer, like i had nothing else to do. SERIOUSLY, you are utterly amazing. I don't know ... this little gem is fucking EPIC, man. And i really don't know how to critique it: it makes me laugh, it makes me feel like i can ALMOST wrap my head around it, but i fail. And yet, i think i get it. "Clever as a sandwich" ... sweet. Remarkable. How useless am i? Just how utterly useless am i? Wow. I began a clever little poem of mine with the line "O, but if i had the courage of Prufrock..." yeah there's more to it. I thought that was pretty good irony, and kind of subtle (but clearly a little pretentious, but hey, i wrote in university while studying you know who, whaddya want?), but it can't touch this. And i still haven't finished that piece either. So, "critiques" be damned,this is just MAMMOTH. O, did i say, thanks for the read.

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