Disharmony Cocoon*

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She feeds on praise,
plies purple prose.
Error stands in her ways.

She denies them all,
turns favor inward,
heeding conscience' calls
though no one knows
her moments small as dust
lying webbed in corners,
unobserved among uncounted detrius.

Years

that never wash away in tears abide.
Seas of poems still crash ashore.

When storms roil disharmony,
she within the eye is held
unseen, in abject silence.

Alone.

Eerily serene in dreams,
until wakened to lightning,

screams.


*Written with tungtied2u for the Grab a Partner challenge.

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LeBrozLeBrozalmost 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,000 poems.

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LadyJeanneLadyJeanneover 19 years ago
Well done

The line that stands out for me is "Error stands in her ways." That's the one I'll be pondering. Good stuff.

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
Guessing that it started this way:

T: She feeds on praise,

C: plies purple prose.

I like the poem. I was just trying to figure out who did which lines. :)

TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
your

poem has been mentioned in friday reviews

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