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Water is seeping, fetch buckets and mop
there's spanners and tools all over the floor
find wellington boots can't work in this slop
the gland nut and spindle won't work anymore.

There's spanners and tools all over the floor
cursing and swearing won't mend what's bust
the gland nut and spindle won't work anymore.
ears are burning at the words he just cussed.

Cursing and swearing won't mend what's bust
the spanner is slipping, and so is my temper
ears are burning at the words he just cussed.
now just mind your manners Mr Joe Kemper.

The spanner is slipping, and so is my temper
find wellington boots can't work in this slop
now just mind your manners Mr Joe Kemper
water is seeping, fetch buckets and mop.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
it even has

a frantic feel to it. When I realized it was a form, I had to go back to see where the lines repeated and to me, that is a good form poem, when it blends so well.

~NJ

EroticOrogenyEroticOrogenyalmost 15 years ago
Nic pantoum

The images and emotions come through clearly.

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 15 years ago
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What happened to you? You aren't the same poet you were this time a year ago. I really, really like this one. Love the words and phrases, like Water is seeping, fetch buckets and mop/the gland nut and spindle won't work anymore.