- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Do You Believe In
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Do you believe in:
Magic of that love,
which is at first sight?
Do you believe in:
Feelings that tell you,
everything is alright?
Do you believe in:
White sandy beaches,
washed by gentle waves?
Do you believe in:
Traces of children's
sand castles and caves?
Do you believe in:
Colorful valleys,
painted with flowers?
Do you believe in:
Crispy morning air,
after some showers?
Do you believe in:
Winds full of whisper,
birds full of chatter?
Do you believe in:
Things that are simple,
but surely matter?
Do you believe in:
Precious gifts of life,
taken for granted?
Do you believe in:
Those things that can make,
our lives so enchanted?
Do you believe in:
Loving someone,
sight still unseen?
Do you believe in:
Feeling you've known them
and not in a dream?
Do you believe in:
That one true love
in a lifetime we have?
Do you believe in:
Magical moments,
bliss made for two?
Do you believe in:
Me being put here
solely for you?
Do you believe in:
Anything is possible
and knowing that's true?
Do you believe in:
Crying at movies
that tug at your heart?
Do you believe in:
Knowing it's the right one
right from the start?
Do you believe in:
Vows that were made
never to be broken?
Do you believe in:
That gold wedding band
being more then a token?
Do you believe in:
Staying together
through good times and bad?
Do you believe in:
Comfort from a loved one,
whether happy or sad?
Do you believe in:
Me loving you,
for the rest of our lifes?
Do you believe in:
Letting down your guard,
because it feels right?
Do you believe in:
Me finally stopping
and leaving on that note?
Do you believe In:
Me writing this for one
I still don't know?
- COMMENTS
Corpse_rideralmost 13 years agoI like the concept, but the piece is too long and after reading 'do you believe' for the 26th time, my senses were battered. It should have been much shorter. Also with the exceptions of 1st, 2nd, 13th, 15th, 21st and 23rd stanza what is described is not a question of belief. A half dozen of the strongest stanzas from this (instead of the 26 here) would have made for a stronger poem. Less would be more, so to speak.
Stanza 23: 'lifes' should be 'lives'
