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Click hereDominatrix Desires
I am here to push you to the limits and beyond in an effort to teach you how to serve the Divine Goddess.
You must yield to Her and show her that you can leave your ego at the door.
She loves receiving gifts of Perfume, Gold, Leather and Lace from grateful slaves.
I, have a penchant for tall, slim, athletic, blonde-haired, blue-eyed males: especially boys who now how to obey.
Though all are wlcome to serve Her
To be Her slave you must be devoted and subservient to Me.
Humbleness is a priority.
You will yield to my demands and anticipate my needs.
If you are seeking Corporal Punishment I have no hesitation in using the cane as hard as you can take it.
I have a huge array of whips, paddles, canes, cats, straps and other devices for the purposes of corporal punishment.
You will be still; and I will thrash, spank and whip you.
I am a tall, powerful womyn who can leave bruises that will last a month.
I may leave a mark and cause you a delightful amount of tantalising pain.
Sometimes, I will use the soft suede cat-o-nine tails, which can be swung with immense passion yet leave no lingering mark.
Or, if it pleases me I will take you on a kinky journey of erotic tease that will make your toes curl and the hair stand up on the back of your neck.
It will be the most erotically intense experience you will ever have.
So come into the dark world of bondage and discipline.
You will experience absolute ecstasy and be left gasping for breath
I welcome you to come and experience the tantalizing world of erotic torture that escapes my finger tips.
You will know your place in life and fulfil your destiny by being submissive and obeying The Goddess Dominatrix!
Never thought of myself as submissive
But I like the idea of obeying you
Goddess Dominatrix, what a lovely name
I could fall in love with it
Whispering it reverentially
As I kneel down
To softly kiss your feet
Imagining your hands in my hair
Telling me just what to do
Yanking me by the hair
Up your smooth, scented skin
Till I reach...
(would so love to continue imagining this...)
wow the image you portayed was dark an exciting!!
I would love to submit myself to you!!!
There is NOT a catagory for this type of work...it IS NOT a poem neither is it a story.
Good on you for having a go.
Of course a poem doesn't have to rhyme, but I didn't really find many poetic elements in your poem, aside from an error that rhymed. You've written prose here, not so much a prose poem. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Poetry#Elements_of_Poetry