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Don't Desecrate the Daisies

byMeela_Sandris©

Please don’t desecrate
Anymore daisies
On my behalf.

Please don’t tear at
Those delicate delights.

Please don’t rip their sweet limbs
Form the Earth,
Nor selfishly pluck petals
Form their yearning young faces.

I loved you then,
I love you still.

So, dance with those dear darlings upon my grave,
Letting their wild love grow.

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by Meela_Sandris09/26/18

Thank you much, robertodavo, for your inspirational comment. Words like yours help me to see my poems/writing through others’ eyes.

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by ROBERTODAVO09/26/18

Delicate Beauty well expressed!

A beautifully delicate poem about the possibility of destructive love. I greatly enjoyed.

robertodavo aka Robert Davidson.

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by Meela_Sandris09/11/18

Thank you for reading it, and for the awesome vote!

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by kurrginatorX09/11/18

What can I say?

I liked it. 5 stars.

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