Doomed to Repeat It

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Before dawn
in the narcosis of dreams
you were dressed in white
linen skirt ,blue and white striped
nautical blouse
I watched you step
bare legged from your car
a breeze teased with tanned shiny shins
and the top of those knees where smooth danger lurks
it was a place and time you never were
in my life

I was 20 then
whippet thin and wild
drunk ,coked and singing songs of anger and betrayal
You were 26, slim and hungry
small breasted and dissatisfied
we could have fed our addictions and lusts for years

It was a glimpse at a moment that should have happened
when the time was right for us
I saw it and, for a flash, lived there
and oh baby
I miss it already

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tazz317tazz317about 9 years ago
SOME THINGS ARE WORTH A REPEAT

even the doomed ones. TK U MLJ LV NV no **S available

Ashesh9Ashesh9about 9 years ago
Honey , Tathagatha is a venerable senior Veteran in this website:

he has deleted a lot , written a lot & discussed , debated & demolished much on this site in Legendary encounters which are recounted in hushed tones 'mongst other Veterans .

BTW : Tathagatha means He who has Arrived & is one of the monikers attributed to the Buddha ...........

HoneyAdoredHoneyAdoredabout 9 years ago
Reminising

Well that trip down memory lane made me feel like I was right there too. I enjoyed this so much I had to click on your profile to see what else you had written, only one other offering but l'm glad I caught that one too and l look forward to reading your future writes.

todski28todski28about 9 years ago
Too good

nostalgic and gritty

makes me wanna go out and slam back some whiskey shots!

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