Door To The Heaven

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Now we lay here, side by side
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Now we lay here, side by side
Reliving the past
The moment of completeness
Whispering to ourselves
Along with the echoes of heartbeats
Completely forgetting the exposure
Celebrating the bliss
Utter joy of intimacy
Sharing the path
A Door To The Heaven.

I closed my eyes, shut
Taking myself back to the moment
To cherish the smile
The smile that told me everything
The love of you, for me
When I was between your legs
In the hope to bring you joy
To take you to the place
Drinking the potion of eternity
From the Door To The Heaven

I turned to my side
Only to find your eyes
Singing the songs of our love
The way we shared our souls
Those were the eyes
That I saw when I was entering you
When I was seeking permission
To enter the world of divinity
To enter the place full of love
Through The Door To The Heaven.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
ah yes, the vagina is the "Door to Heaven"

and what else is new Bucko? This monumental work might be paired down a bit or scrapped. Oh yes, the line, "When I was between your legs" is absolutely terrible. Be more to the point. Don't act like your dick is the key to the kingdom. Her lack of response indicates she's had far better keys between her legs. Try again dear boy, and try to be less chauvinistic next time.

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