Down on the Shore

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Under the pier
where the sand is hard
but dry, we lay.
Hamburgers, bonfires
and even firework celebrations,
melt into insignificance
as your tongue sinks
between my legs.
Only the soaring gulls
echo back
my keening cries.

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JWrenJWrenover 9 years ago

Under the pier: so very old England. Love it, especially the evocative keening cries.

oneiriaoneiriaover 10 years ago
Very nice.

I like the transition in imagery.

AngelineAngelineover 10 years ago
Very clear and solid

a really strong image with sound and sense made clear to the reader. :-)

TzaraTzaraover 10 years ago
Ah, the cunnilingus poem!

My favorite subgenre of erotic poetry. Well done, UYS.

HarryHillHarryHillover 10 years ago
I hate the beach; sand gets into EVERYTHING!

but I loved the poem :)

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