- Erotic Poetry
- Downpour of my dreams
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You'll rain
In the rain.
When it's pouring down persistently
You'll need to pee desperately,
And will do so uncontrollably
But we'll laugh at this outrage,
For our lovelust is displayed
In that forbidden language.
That outrageous liquid language!
A thousand flagrant promises
Of pattering intimacies,
Spattering kisses,
Cascading caresses,
Gush splatter passions,
Such insistent hissing urgencies,
How I listen to your rain!
How I love the declarations of your steaming pouring pee,
As it echoes and outdoes the pouring falling rain.
Yet it will be our joy, not shame.
When you're raining down our romance,
Spraying down your sexuality
Pouring down erotic passion
Such rain of such emotion.
Drenching my senses through and through
Such a lovers downpour you will do
And I will love you in the rain.
@ AquaDave 04 10
- COMMENTS
Magnetronabout 10 years agoMeh ..... I feel it has great potential, the concept is original .... but ........ I hope urine for a bit of criticism.
The word "pee" is more of a juvenile term and works against the adult flow.
Personally, IF I found such an activity erotic, I would leave it implied and let the reader draw the conclusion that this about May flowers bringing golden showers.
The word "Pour" is overused. Alternates will only help to reinforce the whole.
