dream coding

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pale words hang in sterile air
once charged with fiery hope
faint fading pulses
'neath translucent skin -
grey blue on glass bone

life whisper rasps
through parched lips
to caress my mind
still
achingly beautiful
still

rapt by feathery wings of light
the dream floats free
bathed in the flatline glow

eerie embers of optimism
expire with one last gasp
one last tear
one lasting scar

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9 Comments
AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Very inspiring....

well done.

Harry LegHarry Legabout 18 years ago
Beautifully written

I love the way this is written. Economy of verse. Wonderful. I loved it.

Selena_KittSelena_Kittabout 18 years ago
haunting

This is a haunting poem. Your words are compelling. Beautiful.

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
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Seems to be about shadows, so it is appropriate that it feels like shadows.

ty,bd

lobomaolobomaoover 18 years ago
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as it all fades

away awash in gray

dreams and memories

departing steam

exhales in winter

we stand on the runway

as sighted down flat flight lines

we watch and wave

good bye

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