- Erotic Poetry
- Dream Lover
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Click hereShe laid in bed
Her dream lover comes to her
As always he's there
His hands warm and callused
His touch soft and sweet
She responds to him again
His identity unknown
Her passion is her fuel
His touch ignites her soul
She aches for his reality
She wants to move for him
With him
Yet her body is unyielding
Unmoving to his touch
Finally she can speak
She whispers his name
He whispers hers
- COMMENTS
vrosej10about 13 years agoIt's not badly written,the problem is that it doesn't stand out from the dozens of poems here that are similar. Erotic poetry is hard to do in an original way. Read some of the poems here, try something different.
estragonabout 13 years agoalthough she might have gotten laid in bed. Poem needs editing. Try this:
His identity unknown
Her passion her fuel
His touch ignites her soul
She aches for him
Wants to move for him
With him
Yet her body is unyielding
Unmoving to his touch.
SweetOblivionabout 13 years agoIt has a soft and satisfying resonance. I look forward to your next effort. S.O.
