as I pour
myself
into your glass
light splashes and plays
on each of my curves
free
I tumble and dance,
for your mind
has stripped
bare all my clothes:
so clear, so liquid
I gleam and entice,
come—follow this lure—
for wet with your kisses
I implore,
imbibe this elixir,
past dewy shimmer,
take in my essence,
then again ever more...
just to course through your veins,
to be what beats in your pulse,
to feel the cool breeze
or blush warm in your skin—
please, please,
drink up,
let me see as you do
and embrace your within.
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I love your ideas and images
And the beautiful way you put them together.
you
Weave some wonderful words together, I am in agreeance with greenmountaineer on this one here, I often agree with his comments. Thanks for the read
first two stanzas nicely written; "for wet with your kisses/I implore'/" didn't sound right, and "then again evermore..." felt like a cliché; nicely done last stanza bringing it back together.
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