- Erotic Poetry
- Driving Down the Godless Shore
Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.
You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.
Click here
Driving down the Godless shore,
Blasting songs of depravity,
On a curb I saw a whore,
And she, fucking, said to me:
"Blast a song about a cunt!"
So I yelled, "a cunt like you."
"Say't again, you goddamn runt;"
So I yelled: "I'll fuck you, too."
"Bet you won't, you little coward;
Fuck a man, you spineless queer,"
So I said the same again,
While she laughed at me and sneered.
"Oh, fuck off now, pretty please,
Home to bed and jerking off;
Fuck me in your fantasies,"
And I knew she'd called my bluff.
So I made this silly poem,
Written on my laptop screen.
Because I am a cowardly man,
Dirty mind with hands too clean.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 13 years agomore credit than deserved for this...poem? The first stanza is drunken grammar. I suppose the use of crude words was intended to be titillating, however it doesn't. It shows lack of vocabulary.
Anonymousover 13 years agoBut it is buried under clumsy rhetoric. Rewrite it without the rhymes, then revise.
