dropping into cool

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he says move it aside
I say step to the left
steam and reflection block my intentions

open
drop me down cool air sinking
on knees bath-rug ready

drop me down
fingers through damp
until nails 'round back
tips between, and...

oh

yes that too

chrome rail for support
smile up shower spray on face
hold those...god those thighs...

let me take those shakes away
with a
yes
and that too

come on baby
give it up for your girl
send the quiver and
shiver into me as I swallow you down

always leaving room for more
step to the left, baby
move it aside

~from all of a sudden thread~

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
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Steamy and dangerous... just like you

PatCarringtonPatCarringtonover 19 years ago
erotica with flair

a poem with sexual tension / the gapped phrasing and thought is very well-executed / "that too" -- how does one give those two words power? / you do, somehow

LiarLiarover 19 years ago
yes

Erotic poetry with equal parts playfulness and nerve.

flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
Gulp!

I'm with Tath on this one: I need a cold shower after this! Well, not WITH Tath.... Scalding rain, Seattle!

sandspikesandspikeover 19 years ago
the Seattle Rain fell to her knees.....

and God said this is a good thing. He must have.

Great erotic poetry.

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