Drowning isn't so bad

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something very wrong today/cuts burning like fire
sitting on the balcony/too hot
feeling of dread or maybe general malaise/not sure which
just uncomfortable, as if my skin /hair legs arms/decided they didn't fit anymore
torn black shirt jeans and boots
piles of cigarette butts in ashtray
empty beer bottle/ need to get more
girl is gone/lost maybe/can't remember
down to 3 smokes out of blue paint h
ave to read the tube/colorblind/black and white/cliche'
jogging by/it really shakes/gods look at her
phone ringing/let it go/don't want to talk
cat is being strange, he can sense it/impending doom
chair with only 3 legs/still works
broke one/too much leaning
2 more days/back home/home?
 scarred/scared/beaten/crushed
she'll hold my head under/drowning isn't so bad

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
where is the troll?

when you need him?

it MUST be Literotica survivor time because this awful stuff eeks out of the woodwork when that competition starts...

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
not bad

this is still a good bad but it lacked the spark of your other poem posted today.

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