- Erotic Poetry
- Drum Beats Me
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Click hereI am the drum.
I am the tum tum ta-tum.
My eyes are cymbals,
(are symbols),
slapping the empty,
spitting on melody.
Here’s a stick,
beat me.
Here’s a strap,
carry me.
Put your ear to the ground,
your heart on the floor.
Tum tum ta-tum
I am the drum.
I am the locomotive, chest-thumping, piston jumping, hard eight of your soul,
begging your savagery,
inviting your ignorance.
Tum tum ta-tum
With me
you fuck and howl and cry
and crawl
and god’s not coming to help you.
Tum tum ta-tum.
If you hear me,
here
me,
fear me.
I am the drum.
I am the drum.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoThank you everyone for your comments and suggestions. I'm humbled by the response from the Lit poetry community. I'm so very grateful for your encouragement.
Smiles - K
Tzaraalmost 15 years agowhich seems very snare drum-like. Very interesting idea and pretty well executed. I'd like to see you write more poems.
UnderYourSpellalmost 15 years agoWell done! You say that poetry isn't your thing but you do yourself an injustice. I look forward to seeing much more from you
ellabeealmost 15 years agoI really like this until the third stanza...then the tone changes quite a bit. It seems almost like two different poems.
But I really did like the first two stanzas. Good job!
WriterDomalmost 15 years agoDamn, you didn't use any of bflagsst's seven forbidden words and he still gave you only 50%. Maybe he doesn't like the subject matter?
